Today I edited 'McSean', 'Off the Rails', and 'Blind Lust and Raw emotion' for my application to University. The major changes have been done to 'Off the rails' where I cut large and irrelevant slabs of description out, this story was checked by my english teacher Mrs Chapman. 'Blind Lust and Raw emotion' also underwent a change, with the replacement of the 'Feds' to 'cops' so it wound be more realistic. McSean's changes were only minor grammatical ones.
Previously I have not given direct links to my writing's, as it is a geocities site, and the .../stephenkingofoz/...htm looks tacky, but I will anyway now.
or alternatively you can view my works on fictionpress.com by going to my author page.